40th Writing Contest • First Place, Poetry

Claire Bateman of Greenville, South Carolina has won the New Millennium Poetry Prize for “Meanwhile, We Called Ourselves Human,”.

She will $1,000, a certificate to mark the success, and publication both online and in print.

Maureen McLane, celebrated poet and 2014 National Book Award Finalist, served as our guest judge for this contest. McLane had these words of praise for Bateman’s poem:

“A poem both philosophical and grounded in this our concrete world, a beautiful unfolding reticulated lyric registration of what it means to live now and in deep time — to dwell briefly and complicatedly as humans in this ‘phenomenal universe’ amidst our ‘patio kitchens and  sun room gardens,’ amidst ‘continental drift, the deaths of oceans.’ A ranging, surprising, ambitious poem, with flashes of humor leavening its sometimes Biblical cadences: an unusual combination of intellectual and sensual engagement. Brava!”

—Maureen McLane


By Claire Bateman

Meanwhile, We Called Ourselves Human,

having unblinked our eyes to an extravagance of middles,
the world in medias res from the get-go,

teeming, packed, where the song of matter was
the sound of everything not touching—
continental drift, the deaths of oceans,
moving plates on a molten core,

just a little prestidigitation on the part
of the phenomenal universe, with nothing
the same different as before.

Thus we aspired to be both inside and outside,
and so constructed patio kitchens and sun room gardens;

we cultivated disequilibrium,
relished rocking and being rocked—
if possible, we would have planted tree houses in boats—

just as we craved categories.
We: the living. You: the departed.
Do not cross line.

And always, we practiced purification
by soaking, abrasion, radiation, steam,
sonic bombardment, saturation in snow and darkness.

Ever recursive, we instructed our children to inquire,
Why is this night the same as every other night?

since from time immemorial
we’d distrusted our relationship with time,
having detected a certain tendency toward drift;

apparently, we’d been assigned to occur
gradually and all at once,

though any of us could have slipped through a needle’s eye
merely by erasing all the emptiness between our atoms,
like the honeycomb spaces in stacked pearls.

And concerning the sizes of various infinities,
no limitation was ever ascertained.

And most of the world’s passageways remained invisible to us:
incendiary after-trails of music inside the skull;
backtracings of remorse burrowing into the future.

And each of us would have chosen, over all other gifts,
to possess a resplendent singing voice:

there was that much glory within us pressing for release!
As well as grief, the universal solvent.

For who did not find themselves
at the center of everything flying equidistantly away?

No wonder we so easily fell into errors of transposition
and so exposed our wounds, bandaging everything else.

And it was evening and it was morning of the first day.

And everywhere our faces cast their penumbras
as we asked ourselves:

If it’s not good to live in the past,
why are we here together?


ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Claire Bateman’s newest poetry collection Scape is forthcoming in 2016 from New Issues Poetry & Prose.

She has taught at Clemson University, the Greenville Fine Arts Center, and various workshops and conferences, and lives in Greenville, SC.

 

 

 

 

 

"Meanwhile, We Called Ourselves Human," © 2014 Claire Bateman

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